Sunday, July 17, 2011

Practice, practice, practice.

These are a couple of warm ups and an attempted page of comic strip script.



Not all that much happens on this page so I think it may not grab the readers attention enough.
I was hoping to establish their relationship as old friends but i think it needs to happen differently.

I feel that more initial action is needed in comic openings so I will probably rewrite it.

This is a concept that I plan on finishing first.


So this might be used, but probably as a reference to how I want them to interact. 

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1 comment:

  1. im commentin on your blog

    but im too retarded to have anything to say

    MAYBE LATER B:

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